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> <channel><title>Comments for zipper68</title> <atom:link href="http://www.zipper68.com/comments/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" /><link>http://www.zipper68.com</link> <description></description> <lastBuildDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 08:40:50 +0000</lastBuildDate> <sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod> <sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency> <generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1</generator> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by angelsoulnme</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-185</link> <dc:creator>angelsoulnme</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 08:40:50 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-185</guid> <description>No. you are sending in the entire amount, so they are not estimated. Estimated taxes are for the coming year, broken into Normally 4 installments.   Great site for taxes is  www.irs.gov.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No. you are sending in the entire amount, so they are not estimated. Estimated taxes are for the coming year, broken into Normally 4 installments.   Great site for taxes is <a
href="http://www.irs.gov" rel="nofollow">http://www.irs.gov</a>.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by mazziatplay</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-184</link> <dc:creator>mazziatplay</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 03:48:53 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-184</guid> <description>Conventional Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac loans (and like incestors) loans are not assumable.  FHA and VA loans are assumable but they require a qualifying assumption which means you must qualify similar to if you were purchasing.The day of simply walking in and taking over payments is pretty much a thing of the past.  Too many sellers and lenders got burned by defaulting blind assumptors.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Conventional Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac loans (and like incestors) loans are not assumable.  FHA and VA loans are assumable but they require a qualifying assumption which means you must qualify similar to if you were purchasing.</p><p>The day of simply walking in and taking over payments is pretty much a thing of the past.  Too many sellers and lenders got burned by defaulting blind assumptors.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by the tax lady</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-183</link> <dc:creator>the tax lady</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 02:45:00 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-183</guid> <description>Unless you were paying excise taxes, you have any.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Unless you were paying excise taxes, you have any.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by MadMan</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-182</link> <dc:creator>MadMan</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 01:40:09 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-182</guid> <description>You need to find out who has the loan on the truck and see if you can negotiate with the lender.If this has put a lot of money in to this piece of equipment, he will want you to pay him something on top of the loan amount.Be very careful that no one signs anything without a lawyer reading the paperwork over.As the guy above me said, this could be a scam and if you make the payments without some form of legal contract, the guy will keep the truck and any money you sank in to it.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You need to find out who has the loan on the truck and see if you can negotiate with the lender.</p><p>If this has put a lot of money in to this piece of equipment, he will want you to pay him something on top of the loan amount.</p><p>Be very careful that no one signs anything without a lawyer reading the paperwork over.</p><p>As the guy above me said, this could be a scam and if you make the payments without some form of legal contract, the guy will keep the truck and any money you sank in to it.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Gary H</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-181</link> <dc:creator>Gary H</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 00:28:09 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-181</guid> <description>My $000.02Sending money towards your principle is good for several reasons, but first you need to acknowledge the four of a loan.  You have the principle, the term, the interest rate, and the payment.When ever you change one of these it affects the other three.Example a - one extra payment a year of a 30yr loan reduces your term by 7.5yrs, and it lowers the net effective interest rate about 2%.   The best - your credit score goes up because it gets as your being more responsible.Getting closer to your situation - four years ago I brought a $45k boat, with payments at $320 a month, based 6.75% on a 15yr loan.  The first year I paid an extra $4k in payments, then an extra $2k the following year.  Now I average about $400 to $500 paying each month.I figure I have saved close to $7k interest by the extra payments.  Best yet a few months ago I checked my credit score, it was at 797.Good Luck...</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My $000.02</p><p>Sending money towards your principle is good for several reasons, but first you need to acknowledge the four of a loan.  You have the principle, the term, the interest rate, and the payment.</p><p>When ever you change one of these it affects the other three.</p><p>Example a &#8211; one extra payment a year of a 30yr loan reduces your term by 7.5yrs, and it lowers the net effective interest rate about 2%.   The best &#8211; your credit score goes up because it gets as your being more responsible.</p><p>Getting closer to your situation &#8211; four years ago I brought a $45k boat, with payments at $320 a month, based 6.75% on a 15yr loan.  The first year I paid an extra $4k in payments, then an extra $2k the following year.  Now I average about $400 to $500 paying each month.</p><p>I figure I have saved close to $7k interest by the extra payments.  Best yet a few months ago I checked my credit score, it was at 797.</p><p>Good Luck&#8230;</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Atoria</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-180</link> <dc:creator>Atoria</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 17 Jan 2012 06:27:08 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-180</guid> <description>Your car will be repossessed. You will have to use the Shoe Leather Express!!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Your car will be repossessed. You will have to use the Shoe Leather Express!!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by none</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-179</link> <dc:creator>none</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 17 Jan 2012 02:58:54 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-179</guid> <description>dont pay</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>dont pay</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Eli</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-178</link> <dc:creator>Eli</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 17 Jan 2012 01:46:19 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-178</guid> <description>I dunno about New Jersey specifically, but payment in lieu of taxes (PILOT) are payments made by State or Federal governments (and some other organizations), on that they own, to the town or county where the is located.Normally, taxes are paid to the municipality or county by the owners of rental But State and Federal Governments are tax exempt so they pay no taxes.  Instead, they make a payment in lieu (in place of) those taxes. The argument is that the get the same services as other but, if they are tax exempt, they pay their fair share for the services. In areas with a lot of government owned this can create a serious burden for the local government and tax payers. So only fair for the higher levels of government to make up the (PILOTs may also be made by other exempt organizations like churches or non-profits in some circumstances.)PILOTs are usually lower than regular taxes houses, office buildings and churches put kids in the school system or use the public libraries or parks) so there is often friction between the local taxing authorities and the exempt owners as to what is a &quot;fair&quot; PILOT.I think what your form is asking is: &quot;Is the building you live in owned by a government or other exempt organization (like a church) which is tax exempt but makes payments in lieu of taxes to the local town or county&quot;.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I dunno about New Jersey specifically, but payment in lieu of taxes (PILOT) are payments made by State or Federal governments (and some other organizations), on that they own, to the town or county where the is located.</p><p>Normally, taxes are paid to the municipality or county by the owners of rental But State and Federal Governments are tax exempt so they pay no taxes.  Instead, they make a payment in lieu (in place of) those taxes. The argument is that the get the same services as other but, if they are tax exempt, they pay their fair share for the services. In areas with a lot of government owned this can create a serious burden for the local government and tax payers. So only fair for the higher levels of government to make up the (PILOTs may also be made by other exempt organizations like churches or non-profits in some circumstances.)</p><p>PILOTs are usually lower than regular taxes houses, office buildings and churches put kids in the school system or use the public libraries or parks) so there is often friction between the local taxing authorities and the exempt owners as to what is a &quot;fair&quot; PILOT.</p><p>I think what your form is asking is: &quot;Is the building you live in owned by a government or other exempt organization (like a church) which is tax exempt but makes payments in lieu of taxes to the local town or county&quot;.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by bob b</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-177</link> <dc:creator>bob b</dc:creator> <pubDate>Mon, 16 Jan 2012 08:12:24 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-177</guid> <description>BE careful.  Lots of scams out there.
Be sure you get title or iron-clad contract for deed.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>BE careful.  Lots of scams out there.<br
/> Be sure you get title or iron-clad contract for deed.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Maamoul</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-176</link> <dc:creator>Maamoul</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 15 Jan 2012 09:28:47 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-176</guid> <description>Ellos aceptan muchas formas de pagoor El hotel acepta muchas formas de pago.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ellos aceptan muchas formas de pago</p><p>or El hotel acepta muchas formas de pago.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Cruise Guy</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-175</link> <dc:creator>Cruise Guy</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 15 Jan 2012 08:15:45 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-175</guid> <description>It is probably because of the amended return.  I know I owe anything.  I filed an amended return april 13 and my status for receiving the stimulus payment is the same...delayed..</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is probably because of the amended return.  I know I owe anything.  I filed an amended return april 13 and my status for receiving the stimulus payment is the same&#8230;delayed..</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Morningfox</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-174</link> <dc:creator>Morningfox</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 15 Jan 2012 04:39:18 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-174</guid> <description>It&#039;s an estimate, not the final numbers.  If you get it correct to within $200 or so, that should be good enough.  And they mind if you overpay, and ask for a refund later.No, it is not what going to end up paying.  It is the TOTAL tax liability, which includes what you have been paying (payroll withholding) during the year, plus what you might end up paying later.  (or minus any refund.)</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#039;s an estimate, not the final numbers.  If you get it correct to within $200 or so, that should be good enough.  And they mind if you overpay, and ask for a refund later.</p><p>No, it is not what going to end up paying.  It is the TOTAL tax liability, which includes what you have been paying (payroll withholding) during the year, plus what you might end up paying later.  (or minus any refund.)</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by abesegal</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-173</link> <dc:creator>abesegal</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sat, 14 Jan 2012 05:13:06 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-173</guid> <description>a bad idea in general.. the only reason why is because a person is about to file for bankruptcy and anybody who is knows that better to foreclose the home than have somebody take over the payments</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>a bad idea in general.. the only reason why is because a person is about to file for bankruptcy and anybody who is knows that better to foreclose the home than have somebody take over the payments</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by magiccharm</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-172</link> <dc:creator>magiccharm</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sat, 14 Jan 2012 01:52:12 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-172</guid> <description>They want you to estimate how much money you think you will owe the IRS once the taxes are completed.  In addition, they want to know if you have made any payments in 2008, estimated tax payments.Also, you would have to give a little more info than what you have given.  Is this for personal taxes, or a business????????If it is personal taxes just go online and e-file before April 15, 2009 and you need an extension.  If it is for business and you have a financial statement just take the bottom line, net profit/net loss and multiply that by 28% for federal and 5% for state and use that as the estimated tax due, until you get your taxes completed.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>They want you to estimate how much money you think you will owe the IRS once the taxes are completed.  In addition, they want to know if you have made any payments in 2008, estimated tax payments.</p><p>Also, you would have to give a little more info than what you have given.  Is this for personal taxes, or a business????????</p><p>If it is personal taxes just go online and e-file before April 15, 2009 and you need an extension.  If it is for business and you have a financial statement just take the bottom line, net profit/net loss and multiply that by 28% for federal and 5% for state and use that as the estimated tax due, until you get your taxes completed.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by kaligirl...xxx</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-171</link> <dc:creator>kaligirl...xxx</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 13 Jan 2012 10:02:08 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-171</guid> <description>first check with the bank that holds the loan on the truck. most baks are ok with transferring the loan into a new name however they may charge a fee to do so. you do not want your name remaining on the loan or title if something goes wrong. look at kbb.com find the value of the truck compared to loan left. if the value is say 6000 loan is 3000 your friend should in addition to continue paying the loan pay you 3000 difference or what you both find fair.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>first check with the bank that holds the loan on the truck. most baks are ok with transferring the loan into a new name however they may charge a fee to do so. you do not want your name remaining on the loan or title if something goes wrong. look at kbb.com find the value of the truck compared to loan left. if the value is say 6000 loan is 3000 your friend should in addition to continue paying the loan pay you 3000 difference or what you both find fair.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by wiemercats</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-170</link> <dc:creator>wiemercats</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 13 Jan 2012 08:57:03 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-170</guid> <description>When people ask me personal questions like that, I answer &quot;Why do you ask?&quot;</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When people ask me personal questions like that, I answer &quot;Why do you ask?&quot;</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Iffy</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-169</link> <dc:creator>Iffy</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 13 Jan 2012 03:06:47 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-169</guid> <description>Means what bills you must pay every month.  Rent, Insurance, Electric, cable, internet and so on
Do not lie or omit anything since you will have to show bank statements at some point</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Means what bills you must pay every month.  Rent, Insurance, Electric, cable, internet and so on<br
/> Do not lie or omit anything since you will have to show bank statements at some point</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by SPIFIMAN1</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-168</link> <dc:creator>SPIFIMAN1</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 16:26:52 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-168</guid> <description>Onc they are on there they are there to stay. Keep paying your bills on time and your credit score will go up, but it takes time.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Onc they are on there they are there to stay. Keep paying your bills on time and your credit score will go up, but it takes time.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ?</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-167</link> <dc:creator>? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ?</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 11:55:05 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-167</guid> <description>Sounds like a scam to me as loans in the US are not transferable.  If your father makes the payments, the other guy gets to keep the truck.  The only way it works is if your father buys the truck from this &quot;guy that your father knows&quot; and the guy pays off his debt.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds like a scam to me as loans in the US are not transferable.  If your father makes the payments, the other guy gets to keep the truck.  The only way it works is if your father buys the truck from this &quot;guy that your father knows&quot; and the guy pays off his debt.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Horse Head</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-166</link> <dc:creator>Horse Head</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2012 08:35:29 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-166</guid> <description>Social Security owes more than it takes in</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Social Security owes more than it takes in</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Utilize This Guidance When Choosing Your Life Insurance Plan by Tommy</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/finance/utilize-this-guidance-when-choosing-your-life-insurance-plan/#comment-165</link> <dc:creator>Tommy</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 11 Jan 2012 16:00:37 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/?p=259#comment-165</guid> <description>My No one must be interested in the left side of lifes bullshit anymore. O well.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My No one must be interested in the left side of lifes bullshit anymore. O well.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by Windowphobe</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-124</link> <dc:creator>Windowphobe</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 21 Oct 2011 08:53:51 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-124</guid> <description>Not all sites will accept trackbacks, even WordPress sites like that one.But since you&#039;re WordPress, your own WP blog will attempt to send it a ping automatically.  Not that they&#039;re under any obligation to do anything with it when they get it.  I suspect this site has them toggled off, since there&#039;s no reference to them in the page source.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Not all sites will accept trackbacks, even WordPress sites like that one.</p><p>But since you&#039;re WordPress, your own WP blog will attempt to send it a ping automatically.  Not that they&#039;re under any obligation to do anything with it when they get it.  I suspect this site has them toggled off, since there&#039;s no reference to them in the page source.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by sirhelpabit</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-123</link> <dc:creator>sirhelpabit</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 21 Oct 2011 04:40:33 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-123</guid> <description>quick and bodgy fix1. click start &gt; run and type regedit
2. click file &gt; export - save a copy to your desktop (just making a backup of your registry)
3. go back to regedit (the registry editor)
4. go to edit &gt; find &gt; type in whyusewindowsand delete EVERYTHING that has whyusewindows in it.restart your comp and try it!cheers</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>quick and bodgy fix</p><p>1. click start &gt; run and type regedit<br
/> 2. click file &gt; export &#8211; save a copy to your desktop (just making a backup of your registry)<br
/> 3. go back to regedit (the registry editor)<br
/> 4. go to edit &gt; find &gt; type in whyusewindows</p><p>and delete EVERYTHING that has whyusewindows in it.</p><p>restart your comp and try it!</p><p>cheers</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Paulina Paulino</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-122</link> <dc:creator>Paulina Paulino</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 21 Oct 2011 00:28:46 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-122</guid> <description>secular society should stay out of religion religion should stay out of secular society politics corrupts everything it touches</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>secular society should stay out of religion religion should stay out of secular society politics corrupts everything it touches</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Hoadly</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-121</link> <dc:creator>Hoadly</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 20:17:31 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-121</guid> <description>All guitar teachers are different...Try asking your guitar teacher.  and If he doesn&#039;t know, then find a new guitar teacher.  &quot;JAZZ&quot; ,,,,</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All guitar teachers are different&#8230;Try asking your guitar teacher.  and If he doesn&#039;t know, then find a new guitar teacher.  &quot;JAZZ&quot; ,,,,</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Sam</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-120</link> <dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 16:12:12 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-120</guid> <description>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.
I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.</p><p>First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.</p><p>I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.</p><p>Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.</p><p>But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.</p><p>I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Reese</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-119</link> <dc:creator>Reese</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 11:53:40 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-119</guid> <description>I LIKE IT!! and actually I wouldn&#039;t change a thing, and when ur done I&#039;d love to read it!! So send me a mesage when u get farther:)</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I LIKE IT!! and actually I wouldn&#039;t change a thing, and when ur done I&#039;d love to read it!! So send me a mesage when u get farther:)</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Sam</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-118</link> <dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 07:27:51 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-118</guid> <description>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.
I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.</p><p>First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.</p><p>I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.</p><p>Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.</p><p>But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.</p><p>I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Sam</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-117</link> <dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator> <pubDate>Thu, 20 Oct 2011 03:23:10 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-117</guid> <description>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.
I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.</p><p>First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.</p><p>I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.</p><p>Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.</p><p>But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.</p><p>I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Lemon Pirate</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-116</link> <dc:creator>Lemon Pirate</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 18:39:19 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-116</guid> <description>&quot;Some towns have party clubs, but we&#039;ve got our very own bona fide pwawty cloughb!&quot;
is a line from &#039;Nightlife&#039;has the transcript if you want to check it out.
or is the episode.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&quot;Some towns have party clubs, but we&#039;ve got our very own bona fide pwawty cloughb!&quot;<br
/> is a line from &#039;Nightlife&#039;</p><p>has the transcript if you want to check it out.<br
/> or is the episode.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Braindead Brainiac</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-115</link> <dc:creator>Braindead Brainiac</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 10:28:10 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-115</guid> <description>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.</p><p>But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.</p><p>Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by famouswiththedead@rocketmail.com</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-114</link> <dc:creator>famouswiththedead@rocketmail.com</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 06:13:53 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-114</guid> <description>You usually can find all audio / video things you&#039;re looking for on make sure you have a Bit-Torrent first though, makes it way easier to download.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You usually can find all audio / video things you&#039;re looking for on make sure you have a Bit-Torrent first though, makes it way easier to download.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by 5 * ( K</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-113</link> <dc:creator>5 * ( K</dc:creator> <pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 02:04:24 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-113</guid> <description>Your browser has been hijacked. Use HiJack This to determine what needs to be removed.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Your browser has been hijacked. Use HiJack This to determine what needs to be removed.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by peace.loveandsmileys</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-112</link> <dc:creator>peace.loveandsmileys</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 17:40:21 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-112</guid> <description>The owner of the bar also known as my brother, Ryan. We looked so much alike that everyone didn&#039;t bother to kick me out of the bar because I was underaged--they knew our relations and they definitately knew that he would never give me liqour.There is an old phrase, show dont tell. This is telling. But there is another philosophy that a short story should explain as much as possible early on so the reader is not confused. The first sentence of yours that I copied and pasted is not even a sentence but a fragment. The second does not read well as a run-on and it is not concise.
However, the rest of the story is building and had me interested a little. Zombies that look like human? That&#039;s dangerous and intriguing.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The owner of the bar also known as my brother, Ryan. We looked so much alike that everyone didn&#039;t bother to kick me out of the bar because I was underaged&#8211;they knew our relations and they definitately knew that he would never give me liqour.</p><p>There is an old phrase, show dont tell. This is telling. But there is another philosophy that a short story should explain as much as possible early on so the reader is not confused. The first sentence of yours that I copied and pasted is not even a sentence but a fragment. The second does not read well as a run-on and it is not concise.<br
/> However, the rest of the story is building and had me interested a little. Zombies that look like human? That&#039;s dangerous and intriguing.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by Reveal my Identity?</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-111</link> <dc:creator>Reveal my Identity?</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 13:33:59 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-111</guid> <description>Try this:Put this in your &quot;about me&quot; section&quot; :&lt;style&gt;.userProfileURL { display:none; }&lt;/style&gt;</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Try this:</p><p>Put this in your &quot;about me&quot; section&quot; :</p><p>&lt;style&gt;.userProfileURL { display:none; }&lt;/style&gt;</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Reese</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-110</link> <dc:creator>Reese</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 13:33:57 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-110</guid> <description>Phew! (Wiping the sweat off my brow) Lot of reading for a yahoo question but I got through it: okay a great book would be Stephen King-&quot;On writing&quot;I stopped on &quot;The owner of the was bar also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; edit it to &quot;The owner of the bar was also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; Just a minor error on your part no biggie, but it didn&#039;t capture me at first so my problem was the info you were giving me, and you tried to give description all at once. It was a bit tiring so if you could just cut to the chase with her snapping back at the bartender--or how ever she would respond and go from there....</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phew! (Wiping the sweat off my brow) Lot of reading for a yahoo question but I got through it: okay a great book would be Stephen King-&quot;On writing&quot;</p><p>I stopped on &quot;The owner of the was bar also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; edit it to &quot;The owner of the bar was also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; Just a minor error on your part no biggie, but it didn&#039;t capture me at first so my problem was the info you were giving me, and you tried to give description all at once. It was a bit tiring so if you could just cut to the chase with her snapping back at the bartender&#8211;or how ever she would respond and go from there&#8230;.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by G</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-109</link> <dc:creator>G</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 09:09:46 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-109</guid> <description>A couple of possible problems,
Parental Controls (but the message should be different)
If you are in a business environment it could be do to a change made by your
IT folks.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A couple of possible problems,<br
/> Parental Controls (but the message should be different)<br
/> If you are in a business environment it could be do to a change made by your<br
/> IT folks.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Reese</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-108</link> <dc:creator>Reese</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 05:08:01 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-108</guid> <description>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.</p><p>But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.</p><p>Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by sweetdelete</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-107</link> <dc:creator>sweetdelete</dc:creator> <pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 00:55:32 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-107</guid> <description>POST is a type of data passing in html from the page to the site...there&#039;s GET and POST styles...your page is using POST and the URL will only allow GET for some reason...it could also be something unrelated to this and just represent and error in the code...you need to talk to the site admin / your hosting service to find out about what will cause this error and what the rules are for using POST and GET style data exchange</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>POST is a type of data passing in html from the page to the site&#8230;there&#039;s GET and POST styles&#8230;your page is using POST and the URL will only allow GET for some reason&#8230;it could also be something unrelated to this and just represent and error in the code&#8230;you need to talk to the site admin / your hosting service to find out about what will cause this error and what the rules are for using POST and GET style data exchange</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by stephen k</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-106</link> <dc:creator>stephen k</dc:creator> <pubDate>Mon, 17 Oct 2011 16:48:23 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-106</guid> <description>yeah in some angles it does but not too much ..</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>yeah in some angles it does but not too much ..</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Cashen</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-105</link> <dc:creator>Cashen</dc:creator> <pubDate>Mon, 17 Oct 2011 12:28:03 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-105</guid> <description>Strange</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Strange</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Fame writer</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-104</link> <dc:creator>Fame writer</dc:creator> <pubDate>Mon, 17 Oct 2011 08:23:01 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-104</guid> <description>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds great. Really. I was impressed.</p><p>But something I would suggest is this: Let the story flow. Get all of your ideas and your story down on paper. Then, when you have finished the last chapter, it is then that you begin the &quot;edit&quot; phase and start picking your story apart and &quot;improving&quot; on chapters.</p><p>Writing is an art. It doesn&#039;t have to be right the first time.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Personnel desire to use communication expertise when chatting to clientele by ATL FALCONS ROCK</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-102</link> <dc:creator>ATL FALCONS ROCK</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 15:31:29 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/internet/personnel-desire-to-use-communication-expertise-when-chatting-to-clientele/#comment-102</guid> <description>you have to upload the flash player on your phone</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>you have to upload the flash player on your phone</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by That Damned Heathen</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-101</link> <dc:creator>That Damned Heathen</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 10:35:38 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-101</guid> <description>The problem is that they think America is a &quot;Christian Nation&quot; and therefore all of its laws should reflect this.  They don&#039;t think about the non-Christians and non-Bible Thumpers that would be subjected to the laws against their beliefs.  It would be like a Bible Thumper moving to another country where laws contrary to their beliefs were in place, and they had to conform.Rev. Neil</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The problem is that they think America is a &quot;Christian Nation&quot; and therefore all of its laws should reflect this.  They don&#039;t think about the non-Christians and non-Bible Thumpers that would be subjected to the laws against their beliefs.  It would be like a Bible Thumper moving to another country where laws contrary to their beliefs were in place, and they had to conform.</p><p>Rev. Neil</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Reese</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-100</link> <dc:creator>Reese</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 06:01:04 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-100</guid> <description>Phew! (Wiping the sweat off my brow) Lot of reading for a yahoo question but I got through it: okay a great book would be Stephen King-&quot;On writing&quot;I stopped on &quot;The owner of the was bar also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; edit it to &quot;The owner of the bar was also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; Just a minor error on your part no biggie, but it didn&#039;t capture me at first so my problem was the info you were giving me, and you tried to give description all at once. It was a bit tiring so if you could just cut to the chase with her snapping back at the bartender--or how ever she would respond and go from there....</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phew! (Wiping the sweat off my brow) Lot of reading for a yahoo question but I got through it: okay a great book would be Stephen King-&quot;On writing&quot;</p><p>I stopped on &quot;The owner of the was bar also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; edit it to &quot;The owner of the bar was also known as my brother, Ryan&quot; Just a minor error on your part no biggie, but it didn&#039;t capture me at first so my problem was the info you were giving me, and you tried to give description all at once. It was a bit tiring so if you could just cut to the chase with her snapping back at the bartender&#8211;or how ever she would respond and go from there&#8230;.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by EB</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-99</link> <dc:creator>EB</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 01:40:37 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-99</guid> <description>Alright, let&#039;s do this!&quot;...at least that&#039;s what it sounded like but I wasn&#039;t fooled. I knew better.&quot; Confusing sentence is confusing. Did the narrator actually mishear what the bartender said? Or did she understand that the bartender didn&#039;t mean it when he told her to leave? But then... why did he tell the narrator to leave in the first place?&quot;The owner of the bar also known as my brother, Ryan.&quot; This is a sentence fragment. Also, it took me a while to realize that the bartender who told her to leave was in fact the same person as the bar owner, aka Ryan.&quot;everyone didn&#039;t bother to kick me out&quot; --&gt; &quot;no one bothered kicking me out&quot;
&quot;that we inherited from our dead father&quot; --&gt; &quot;that we had inherited from our father&quot; (There&#039;s a better way to let people know her father&#039;s dead.) Speaking of which, you should indicate that the narrator&#039;s a girl. I read half this excerpt thinking she was a boy. How can you do that when writing in 1st person, you ask? &quot;...people joked that they couldn&#039;t tell the difference between us: a joke that had gotten even funnier after I&#039;d graduated from training bras.&quot; Ta da! And now that we know she&#039;s a girl, the joke is funny to the readers as well.&quot;Overall, the closest thing to a father I had was Ryan because he was the oldest of my four brothers and he probably thought he had to take over the father figure after our dad died.&quot; Turns into... &quot;As the oldest, Ryan had tried to take over the job of raising four younger siblings after our dad died. He was the closest thing to a father any of us had.&quot; Much neater. Also, what happened to mom in this story?&quot;He was very protective of me, just like a real father and I couldn&#039;t believe I got him to agree to this!&quot; The first part of this sentence is unnecessary, and the second is confusing. What did Ryan agree to?
&quot;So, when he&#039;d told me that I better leave, he wasn&#039;t joking.&quot; This directly contradicts the very first sentence.
&quot;Unforunately for both of us, I had to act very stubborn and very drunk.... it was all apart of the plan.&quot; I&#039;m so confused. Why is any of this happening? What plan? Why must she act drunk? I thought everyone knew her brother wouldn&#039;t give her alcohol? What&#039;s going on??Edit: I had a novel length answer, but Y!A hates me, and I can&#039;t post the other half. Dammit...</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alright, let&#039;s do this!</p><p>&quot;&#8230;at least that&#039;s what it sounded like but I wasn&#039;t fooled. I knew better.&quot; Confusing sentence is confusing. Did the narrator actually mishear what the bartender said? Or did she understand that the bartender didn&#039;t mean it when he told her to leave? But then&#8230; why did he tell the narrator to leave in the first place?</p><p>&quot;The owner of the bar also known as my brother, Ryan.&quot; This is a sentence fragment. Also, it took me a while to realize that the bartender who told her to leave was in fact the same person as the bar owner, aka Ryan.</p><p>&quot;everyone didn&#039;t bother to kick me out&quot; &#8211;&gt; &quot;no one bothered kicking me out&quot;<br
/> &quot;that we inherited from our dead father&quot; &#8211;&gt; &quot;that we had inherited from our father&quot; (There&#039;s a better way to let people know her father&#039;s dead.) Speaking of which, you should indicate that the narrator&#039;s a girl. I read half this excerpt thinking she was a boy. How can you do that when writing in 1st person, you ask? &quot;&#8230;people joked that they couldn&#039;t tell the difference between us: a joke that had gotten even funnier after I&#039;d graduated from training bras.&quot; Ta da! And now that we know she&#039;s a girl, the joke is funny to the readers as well.</p><p>&quot;Overall, the closest thing to a father I had was Ryan because he was the oldest of my four brothers and he probably thought he had to take over the father figure after our dad died.&quot; Turns into&#8230; &quot;As the oldest, Ryan had tried to take over the job of raising four younger siblings after our dad died. He was the closest thing to a father any of us had.&quot; Much neater. Also, what happened to mom in this story?</p><p>&quot;He was very protective of me, just like a real father and I couldn&#039;t believe I got him to agree to this!&quot; The first part of this sentence is unnecessary, and the second is confusing. What did Ryan agree to?<br
/> &quot;So, when he&#039;d told me that I better leave, he wasn&#039;t joking.&quot; This directly contradicts the very first sentence.<br
/> &quot;Unforunately for both of us, I had to act very stubborn and very drunk&#8230;. it was all apart of the plan.&quot; I&#039;m so confused. Why is any of this happening? What plan? Why must she act drunk? I thought everyone knew her brother wouldn&#039;t give her alcohol? What&#039;s going on??</p><p>Edit: I had a novel length answer, but Y!A hates me, and I can&#039;t post the other half. Dammit&#8230;</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on The disadvantage of raising your declare is when you make a claim you will by Mark S</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/retail/the-disadvantage-of-raising-your-declare-is-when-you-make-a-claim-you-will/#comment-97</link> <dc:creator>Mark S</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sat, 15 Oct 2011 17:16:13 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/retail/the-disadvantage-of-raising-your-declare-is-when-you-make-a-claim-you-will/#comment-97</guid> <description>The way you filed is ok, but it might not be the best way.If you were legally married on 12/31/08, your options, based on your situation, are:1. Husband files HOH. You file MFS
2. You both file MFS
or3. You file MFJ.A married couple can always file a joint return. You didn&#039;t give enough information, but I suspect that a joint return might be the best way for you.You can amend your returns and file a joint return.I would complete a joint return to see if that gives you a better joint refund than the way that you filed.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The way you filed is ok, but it might not be the best way.</p><p>If you were legally married on 12/31/08, your options, based on your situation, are:</p><p>1. Husband files HOH. You file MFS<br
/> 2. You both file MFS<br
/> or</p><p>3. You file MFJ.</p><p>A married couple can always file a joint return. You didn&#039;t give enough information, but I suspect that a joint return might be the best way for you.</p><p>You can amend your returns and file a joint return.</p><p>I would complete a joint return to see if that gives you a better joint refund than the way that you filed.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on All you require to do is convey a greatconclude digital camera and consider by Yousef from Dubai</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/travel/all-you-require-to-do-is-convey-a-greatconclude-digital-camera-and-consider/#comment-96</link> <dc:creator>Yousef from Dubai</dc:creator> <pubDate>Sat, 15 Oct 2011 13:15:38 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/travel/all-you-require-to-do-is-convey-a-greatconclude-digital-camera-and-consider/#comment-96</guid> <description>I have heard that there is, but I am not familiar enough with it to say for sure.</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have heard that there is, but I am not familiar enough with it to say for sure.</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on Has your hard generate failed you for the to begin with time Have you skilled by Sam</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-94</link> <dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 14 Oct 2011 15:48:35 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/computers/has-your-hard-generate-failed-you-for-the-to-begin-with-time-have-you-skilled/#comment-94</guid> <description>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.
I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Overall, I like it. I think you have the setup for a good story here, although it does need some work.</p><p>First off, I would change the beginning. You need the first lines to really pull your reader in. I found your first paragraph a little confusing. I had to keep re-reading sentences because I couldn&#039;t understand what you were trying to say. The words need to flow together more and try spacing it out some. Trying to put a lot of information in only a few sentences can overload your reader and if they don&#039;t understand what is going on they will most likely stop reading.</p><p>I think the main thing you need to focus on is making sure your reader has an understanding of what is happening in your story, and I have this problem in my writing too. You are the writer, so you already know what is going to happen. I, as the reader, do not, so there needs to be enough detail for me to understand and invision the story and characters.</p><p>Add some more detail, take your time with the information you are giving out and clean up some of your sentence structures, especially that first paragraph.</p><p>But like I said overall it is not bad, I enjoyed it and would keep reading if there was more.</p><p>I hope I didn&#039;t seem too harsh! I am a writer as well and know that hearing someone criticize your work, although not fun, is very helpful in the end. Good luck!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> <item><title>Comment on The disadvantage of raising your declare is when you make a claim you will by Smile :]</title><link>http://www.zipper68.com/retail/the-disadvantage-of-raising-your-declare-is-when-you-make-a-claim-you-will/#comment-92</link> <dc:creator>Smile :]</dc:creator> <pubDate>Fri, 14 Oct 2011 05:02:30 +0000</pubDate> <guid
isPermaLink="false">http://www.zipper68.com/retail/the-disadvantage-of-raising-your-declare-is-when-you-make-a-claim-you-will/#comment-92</guid> <description>paying to kill bugs!</description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>paying to kill bugs!</p> ]]></content:encoded> </item> </channel> </rss>
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